英语作文:修订间差异

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假如你是某校九(1)班的学生,你校正在举行"Young Star Award"的评选活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的同学李明,以供参评.内容要点如下:
1.个子高,性格外向,为人友善;
2.学习认真,成绩优秀;
3.爱好广泛,擅长踢足球;
4.乐于助人,…;
5.得到高度赞扬,我们以他为荣.
    
I'm glad to hear the news that"Young Star Award"is going on in our school.I think Li Ming is the hot favorite for the award.
Li Ming is a tall boy of wide interests,especially good at playing football.He is outgoing and always friendly to others.That's why he has a lot of friends.Li Ming studies hard and of course is one of the top students at school.Besides,he takes an active part in different kinds of activities.He is good at soccer ball.Li Ming is helpful.He always gives his seat to someone on the bus.His actions have won high praise from our school.He sets a good example to us all and we are proud of him.


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 范文六:How to protect/save our environment/world?
 范文六:How to protect/save our environment/world?
The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today. Water is polluted; we have no clean water to drink. Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less. Some factories are pouring dirty air in the sky, the population is increasing faster and faster, resources are getting less and less…etc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it but also has a great affection in the future. People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, we need protect our world。
The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today. Water is polluted; we have no clean water to drink. Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less. Some factories are pouring dirty air in the sky, the population is increasing faster and faster, resources are getting less and less…etc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it but also has a great affection in the future. People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, we need protect our world。


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 范文七:How to learn English well
 范文七:How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions。
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions。


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 范文八:My Hobby
 范文八:My Hobby
I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am occupied with my study, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet。
I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am occupied with my study, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet。
One of my favorite hobbies is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years, since I began to learn characters. It can not only kill the time, but also, more important, help improve my comprehension ability. When reading, I can learn a lot. Reading Shakespear's works, I know how Hamlet looks like. Reading Socrates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. Reading Lu Xun, I come back to the old time of China。
One of my favorite hobbies is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years, since I began to learn characters. It can not only kill the time, but also, more important, help improve my comprehension ability. When reading, I can learn a lot. Reading Shakespear's works, I know how Hamlet looks like. Reading Socrates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. Reading Lu Xun, I come back to the old time of China。
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 范文十:Playing Computer Games
 范文十:Playing Computer Games
Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him。
Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him。


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 范文十一:Low-carbon life
 范文十一:Low-carbon life
Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. 
Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. 


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 范文十二:Memories in Middles School
 范文十二:Memories in Middles School
How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others。
How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others。


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 范文十四:Help Others
 范文十四:Help Others
Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted all this life into his beloved career as well. I, myself, was totally shocked by his character。
Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted all this life into his beloved career as well. I, myself, was totally shocked by his character。
Such is human nature; people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan “learn from Leifeng, our decent idol”, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict。
Such is human nature; people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan “learn from Leifeng, our decent idol”, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict。
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 范文十五:What We Get from Sports
 范文十五:What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common—an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Students in our school have one thing in common—an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.